Don Quixote

I like the way this rhymes very rhythmically without sounding cheesy. A very vivid portrait of the end times. It may have been more effective to find some way to ...

Nice work... It was a little confusing for me, but only in so much as it made me want to read closer and decipher the meaning. I think some of ...

First, a few technical errors. I noticed that a couple of times you used the words "nothings" and "somethings". You should either write that "nothing is" or "something is" or ...

I like the basic idea of what you're doing here and parts of it are very well written, but there are some things I would change. You basically run through ...

Well put! I just recently read a short story by Joyce Carol Oates called, "Why Don't You Come Live With Me it's Time." This is a story about an insomniac. ...

Very amusing. I especially liked the fact that you called him "Big G" after he became a gangster. That was pure genius. However, it would seem more like a newspaper ...

Nice story! Could you make the ghost lady be a little more obviously "ghosty" in the scene at the beginning? I mean, it's really good, but I just didn't even ...

I dig it... to a degree. I like the fact that a lot of people can relate to the emotions you are portraying here. Judging by the fact that he ...

I feel like laughing out loud! What a refreshing story. I have a couple of questions though. I don't know what the rules are like for this sort of thing ...

A magical poem! I was just going to skim over your poem to see if it was worth reading, and before I knew it you had swept me into your ...